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8/22/20, 2:05 PM
I thought this was a hot story, but one that doesn't quite measure up to your best work. You're so great at writing stories where fathers and sons are stricken by uncontrollable, unexplainable lust for one another, lust that basically transforms them into rutting animals. But here there's a really complicated backstory for why Sandeep is having sex with the older men in his neighborhood, and it frankly makes no sense to me. Why is Sandeep's father doing this? Why did he wait until they'd already been in the neighborhood a few months to start doing this? You don't have to have tons of exposition, but for me, this story is stuck in an uncanny valley where there's simultaneously too much explanation for what's happening and not enough explanation.
8/22/20, 1:47 PM
Where can I get hypnotized like that? That story was so hot it had me hard & leaking the whole time. Very creative writing. I felt like I was on stage with the guys. Maybe some day I can get hypnotized..any suggestions?
8/22/20, 1:45 PM
Very hot! There are a few typos, but I hope you continue!
8/22/20, 12:57 PM
will you do more of this one?
8/22/20, 12:43 PM
u might want to check for typos...
Jun 2, 2020
8/22/20, 12:28 PM
Hot as fuck!
Aug 21, 2020
8/22/20, 12:19 PM
Great job with this story. Probably not to everyone's taste but the concept was interesting and I liked that you paced the story out well to allow the plot to develop. The mind control and personality change elements were particularly hot!
8/22/20, 10:25 AM
I really enjoyed the first half with the guy on the phone. i wouldve loved to follow him as he got processed. not as into all the drag stuff though.
8/22/20, 8:31 AM
thanks appreciate that.
8/22/20, 6:01 AM
Hi Kyle, I can't promise a set time. But like I said, it was meant to be one single chapter, and I decided to split it because it was already getting really lengthy. So for the second half of this chapter, I'd say that I have maybe over half of it written down already. The rest of the plot is already planned out, but I just need to focus on writing it out. So I sure hope it won't have to be long, but I don't want to commit to you guys and then not be able to deliver. Thanks for your patience and stay tuned! :)