Recent Comments

8/17/20, 10:29 PM
@Lusty Stallion - Thanks bro. The 'short buff guy' thing is a serious turn on for me in real life. @darkblade - Don't worry, I have something fun planned for those Fire Fighters, but they're not next on my list. I'm staying away from scat / piss / gore fetishes since I know they're a real turnoff for a lot of people, including me. Check in tomorrow to find out who the stranger will help next.
8/17/20, 10:18 PM
Such an incredible work! I really like the story so far. The descriptions, the characters, the way Marcus and from now on the newly made friends of his do not suspect Jake to be the enemy, all this looks fantastic and I can't wait for the next chapters and the new transformation scenes!!! I only hope you will keep on writing. I simply don't want this story to end ;-)
8/17/20, 10:15 PM
so, who is next? the Fire fighters? please DON'T give them waterspots/piss fetish is a bit turn-off
Lusty Stallion
8/17/20, 10:11 PM
Loved it man. Nailed it again. I didnt know I liked a tall man shrinking down a full foot and being so packed! Lovin' this series. I always read your stuff man. The random guys who don't always deserve tranaforming is such a turn on
8/17/20, 9:49 PM
@absman420 - Thanks - that means a ton to me!
8/17/20, 9:29 PM
But of course I'd love this chapter! Well done!
8/17/20, 9:22 PM
@SillyBoyz - No worries man, I've gotten and taken a lot of suggestions so far. It's more that we're past the midpoint of the story and I want to make sure I hit the bullseye I'm aiming for. This is a ridiculous experiment I'm attempting, but I think it's gonna come together nicely.
8/17/20, 9:15 PM
@Derek, Thank you for the reply! I didn't mean to tread on your creative process, I assumed because of both the AI writing and you asking for suggestions about the cameraman and reporter that this was a more open, free-for-all. Sorry if I came across as crass or demanding.
8/17/20, 8:25 PM
Thanks for your comments. I know that I can't please all the people, all the time... I also know there are some exceptionally talented writers on this site churning out amazing work and I'm just hiding in the shadows of their craft. I won't give away what will happen next, but don't worry EJG, this isn't going to become Dog Soldiers.
Anonymous
8/17/20, 7:50 PM
Great story