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Maccxuel
8/12/20, 5:13 AM
an incredible story, it lacks some improvements, but they are minimal; Good work, keep it up
i love all your stories!!!
8/12/20, 3:28 AM
just the exact kinda shit im into. this story (and most others youve written) are absolutely perfect. although this is definitely a complete story and i have 100% respect for this being where it leaves off, i cant help but wanna see a little bit more of a slow decline. if you ever put out an inbetweequal i will be there in a heartbeat
8/12/20, 3:04 AM
My favorite chapter so far!!
8/12/20, 2:43 AM
Honestly, I've really been enjoying this series. It's incredibly wholesome. It gives me the same warm feeling I got when I read "The Coffee Shop." I can't wait to read the next chapter on Pine's life as he grows into a handsome young man.
Smpke
8/12/20, 2:36 AM
Damn, write some more, and let's see where these gorilla balls lead him to , as well as those he encounters.
8/12/20, 1:57 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Didn't feel too long at all. I like the creative ways Collin comes up with to enslave people. Excited for part 2
8/12/20, 1:19 AM
This town is becoming less and less Vanilla, perfect~
8/12/20, 12:05 AM
Pine really got his groove when it comes to mind controlling now. Can't wait for act 3 to start. really enjoyed the whole journey to the sports club
8/11/20, 9:49 PM
Ooh this chapter was a hot one. I love when the bully becomes the slave to his victim. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
8/11/20, 9:37 PM
excellent work