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screamingmoist
8/6/20, 12:05 PM
Yep, chapter 3 is also done. Still working on chapter 4, though.
8/6/20, 11:15 AM
> I was going to say my sports would be wrestling, baseball and diving. Then I got to Jake’s opinion of baseball players, thinking good gawd, what must he think about divers? > Jake's opinion of baseball players is directly out of the mouth of my best friend, who, ironically, is a hockey player. He made distinctions between "sports" and "games" that I always thought was very funny. (PS -- he didn't think "track" or "x-country" were sports, either, because they were "just running" -- "You run as part of every other sport, so why is running itself a sport?" Dog, how I miss him.) Although personally, I love all things swimmers and divers, my training partner of the last seven years was a professional swim coach -- HE thought diving was "for the gay guys" cuz they were all "pretty boys" -- so I never heard nice things about it. > And I was hoping the term you told me in previous comments would show up in the wrestler life, but alas, it didn’t. Battle Rod. > This was a disappointment to me, too. I really, honestly, thought it was in there. I KNOW it's in "WRESTLING MATT" -- I mean, it was so ingrained in me by our wrestling coach that I use it when describing underwear models. ("Check that guy... battle rod.")
8/6/20, 10:44 AM
will we see part 3 soon?
8/6/20, 9:03 AM
everything you do is gold this included!!!
Anonymous
8/6/20, 8:28 AM
Interesting, but a little too fast paced
Aug 4, 2020
8/6/20, 7:53 AM
Great story and amazing twist. Please continue the story.
8/6/20, 7:03 AM
Working on the next chapter now. It may be the last or there may be one more. I'm not sure. And Darmani, you are totally right. The character of Rabbit was inspired by Tu'er Shen, the Rabbit God. A deity who manages the love and sex between gay men. I'm glad someone picked up on that. :)
Tom C
8/6/20, 7:02 AM
Really good! Your work always is filled with lots of twists and turns.
Tom
8/6/20, 7:01 AM
Loved it!!
8/6/20, 4:18 AM
A joyous surprise--another excellently crafted chapter! How you managed to hit so many notes that resonate with me is simply amazing. A domineering Master who is kind, yet will not settle until he has what he wants. A spirited servant, who actively contemplates what surrendering himself means. And most amazingly, both keeping their interesting personalities after the mental transformation is complete. I don't know how you did it, but I love it. There's so many amazing questions I'd love to see answered should you write another chapter. It's going to be fascinating to watch the Dragon Lord re-engineer his enchantments specifically to make Kethend into the best and brightest slave he can be, especially for ensnaring others and converting them to the Dragon Lord's hoard. It'd also be fascinating to see Resnlo purposely brought back for the Master's amusement, and have him realize what he's done...and how he may even willingly become Kethend again to feel the pleasure in service. Even seeing our "poor" servant be teased and tormented in order to perform at his best would be fun...I can't help but imagine a bejeweled chastity cage made of silver, making sure that Kethend's manhood is always touching his Master's hoard... Your setting is amazing, and your writing skills are superb. Thank you for sharing this--I enjoyed it immensely.