Recent Comments

7/31/20, 3:42 PM
I like this story. please, continue it.
7/31/20, 3:37 PM
I finished reading this story and was impressed once again with your ability to so effortlessly unfold a narrative. Writing foreign accents is not easy, and you nailed it. The story was still rummaging around in my head the following day when I went to Nordstroms to purchase a new suit for work. And there, looking as incongruous as you wrote was"D.J. Kingsley" -- a clearly caucasian douchebags in the baggy red Jordan outfit as described -- sans dew rag! This dude added the gold chain and a flashy Rolex to complete the effect! Jocked, are you stalking me, doobhead?
Anonymous
7/31/20, 3:29 PM
Can'r wait for the next chapter. Ive been waiting impatiently for the weekend to finally arrive
7/31/20, 12:06 PM
Oh boy oh boy oh boy! Very exciting journey started! Can't wait for more!
screamingmoist
7/31/20, 12:02 PM
Thanks everyone! Excited to be revisiting the Facets universe again. Chapters 2 & 3 are done and will be up over here soon, and I'm getting ready to work on chapter 4 as we speak.
Jul 30, 2020
DD
7/31/20, 11:25 AM
I always look forward to your posts on here, Cockatrice, I can't wait to see more of this story too.
7/31/20, 10:47 AM
Hey Man! Don't stop now. This is great. Been waiting every day for the next chapter.
7/31/20, 7:27 AM
good story! though I didn't think it made sense for Jake to transform since he was following instructions while Kevin gets to stay human
7/31/20, 7:16 AM
By far my favorite nbm story ever brought to this site! Kudos to your efforts Mr.Loucaman. I enjoy the bond of Russell and his son Kyle here, its so heartwarming while Kyle soothed his father in a unique steamy way!
7/31/20, 7:08 AM
Now THAT was an awesome story. Didn't spot the twist until the perfect moment! Hope you have more of the same in mind!