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2/6/25, 7:45 PM
AKA - The shit Supervillains will do to avoid going to therapy. So just one thing that kinda pulled me out of it: what happened to Coach Daniels and the teammates? One second, Colt and Eli are running over to the burning building, then the next Leviathan/Iron Claw is speaking to Colt directly about his parents without any other details about what Colt did to free the trapped folks. Just feels a bit abrupt. Like, did they save the people or did the trapped folks just burn to death?

2/6/25, 8:11 PM
@[RubberLeatherDrone](/user/show/129598) It actually wasn’t supposed to be abrupt. I’ll check and see if I accidentally left it out. In my draft he gets them out and rushes out of the battle area. They all are ok. They are needed later! Edit: yes there is a paragraph and some dialogue missing. I’ll fix that when I can! Good eye!
Anonymous
2/6/25, 1:53 PM
This was excellent, looking forward to more!
Feb 5, 2025
2/6/25, 12:12 PM
Hot, loved it.
2/6/25, 6:59 AM
Again and again chapters in this series have been among my favorites. This one is another favorite. The household Dom had a wonderful reign while it lasted. His downfall was falling in love with Sammy, and then teaching Sammy everything he knew about his process for taking down and conditioning another obedient sub. Sammy was the youngest Parker, got everything he wanted, and in the end that included the man who taught him how to be a dominant and how to build a harem. The next question is what happens next. Does Sammy take over the entire harem, or does he share in the power? I still don't know what will happen next, but i was right about this chapter: Jack Parker is the man to tell us all where this goes from here.
Anonymous
2/6/25, 5:24 AM
It won't be, kinda sucks tbh.
2/6/25, 5:07 AM
Too bad this never continued. Oh well …
2/6/25, 4:20 AM
Wow...wasn't expecting the lore. I love it.
fry
2/6/25, 3:52 AM
Any chance there will be more chapters?
2/6/25, 12:50 AM
Great chapter! Some lovely bonding; it was touching throughout! Can't wait to see where you go from here :D

2/6/25, 3:45 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thank you so much! Looking forward to your next chapter as well!
Anonymous
2/6/25, 3:07 AM
Are you still around, Brian?