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7/27/20, 3:36 PM
Please, sir. Can I have more?
Anonymous
7/27/20, 3:23 PM
I thought this was well written. The author did a very good, detailed, believable job describing the transformation from being a tall, scrawny, stereotypic "twink" to an equally stereotypic, dumb jock bro. The contrast was kind of funny, since usually the character becomes gay or stays gay or retains his own identity while manifesting changes. It would be interesting to see "New" Vince meet "Old" Vince. Does "Old Vince" turn into "Danny"? Possible grounds for a sequel!
Anonymous
7/27/20, 3:23 PM
Oh wow, Edlam writes again! I'm very happy that you're publishing more this year! Spectacular work as always, loved seeing Chris and Alec's descent towards their "bisexual" life. I kinda wished that there was a little less female presence on the sex scene, that's my little nitpick. Yeah, more of Matt and less of Kara. This is a gay site after all. Other than that, this was a great chapter. Can't wait for more!
7/27/20, 3:09 PM
Love the twist at the end with the boyfriends!
7/27/20, 3:01 PM
I love it! You did a great job of capturing the character's travel blogger voice, and the hashtags under each post were hilarious.
7/27/20, 2:42 PM
> Congratulations, it is a saga that has aged well, it did not seem made a decade ago > Haha -- except for the Palm Pilots and landlines and no texting... was it this one where he was writing his journal on a Mac Dual Quad? I take your point, tho. I DO like creating these multi-part sagas... Though I don't want to make this an ADDICTED TO S.T.U.D.D. column, my only goal with that story was to write a dumbing-down piece in 1st person and make it understandable. There's little else in that story (especially the rampant drug use) that interests me to explore further. That was a period of my life I'd rather not revisit. One of my most under-rated sagas is CRATUS' COOTS -- personally, I think that's one of my most successful multi-part stories, especially the way time keeps looping through the narrative. That gets very few reads, tho. > “Nipplesluts / Glans Ring”, which always asks me why you did not continue it > I've been working on another chapter of the NIPPLESLUTS/ GLANS RING world, entitled "BULL BAG" but I haven't gotten much further than the exposition. I started it as COVID came upon us and I lost my motivation... I intend to finish it.
7/27/20, 2:33 PM
Great work! I really like the whole story style! Though it's kinda weird that no one call the cops? This is still an incredible work.Can't wait to see your new story!
Magicsoul
7/27/20, 2:32 PM
Congratulations, it is a saga that has aged well, it did not seem made a decade ago, it is a great saga and you are one of the best writers on this page, in my opinion. However, I am quite new around here (like 2 or 3 years) and I did not know Apollyon but if I know "Addicted to Studd" which I think is one of the best sagas here, it may be my favorite and you created a world that You can enlarge and explore, create other stories from there, I would love it and "Nipplesluts / Glans Ring", which always asks me why you did not continue it
smtmiz
7/27/20, 2:21 PM
What a fantastic story. Not that anything you write is less than fantastic, but this one really went above and beyond. Thank you for pulling it out of hiding and sharing it with the rest of us.
7/27/20, 12:55 PM
Say, this was a lot of fun! I've read a bunch of travel blogs (mostly through college students sponsored by the school), and this hits all the nails on the head. Love the slow transformation. I also kind of like how Cam is so desperate to be "woke"--or, perhaps, to *come across* as woke--that he ignores the blatantly obvious mind-control going on with him, for fear of being offensive. Swizzington, your stories always have fun little commentary in them--great stuff! :D