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7/26/20, 9:43 AM
> Loving the story, even if it’s not getting the ending I was hoping for! > We're still a couple chapters away -- what was the ending you were hoping for?
7/26/20, 9:41 AM
> Well, I guess it rubbed off on me ;) > I love things that rub off on me...
Anonymous
7/26/20, 9:34 AM
Ooh, now I LOVE that. There's a lot of scope there - it's just about trying to balance the story so that everything isn't massively weighted towards Jafar - which'll be hard seeing as he is now God.
7/26/20, 8:18 AM
I hope there's more to . it's a very hot premise
Sc
7/26/20, 7:41 AM
Can't wait to see more!!
7/26/20, 7:21 AM
Loving the story, even if it's not getting the ending I was hoping for! You are a great writer and I really get into all your stories!
7/26/20, 6:58 AM
I want a story about cumming on sleeping dad's feet
7/26/20, 6:47 AM
I must say, as I read this chapter, I though a similar thing to tempest888: Till that point in Jay's Big Hypnotizing Cock, I had the feeling he already was somewhat of a sadist and a narcissit; and then this chapter show him having empathy and the twin look like they will corrupt him. However, I'm not against the idea, sound really interesting actually. The only issue is that this more emphatic side of Jay seems to come out of nowhere and wasn't forshadowed in the first two chapters. It's a bit distracting.
boi98229
7/26/20, 6:24 AM
I second that last motion to continue the story. i would really like to know how our boy might fit in with the cartel, and what they have in store for him. Thanks for the first chapter.
Drake Nightstrom
7/26/20, 5:37 AM
Well this was very good! I wish it was a little longer or the changes were more gradual. Other then that I really enjoyed it. Hope to see more.