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7/20/20, 11:35 PM
OOOOOHHH SNAP! PERFECT continuation! BRAVO. Hot as FUCK and deliciously complex enough to maintain the story tension. Jake's realization of his utter insignificance when he WANTS Jafar so much now coupled with his open ended wish that they only had to STAY together, not be HAPPY together... UGH, these are the story arcs I live for. Jafar always being with Jake means he can go the total anime route, Jake now possesses Jafar's dick, a spirit of the cock with no autonomy but total sentience. Or he can resign himself to a mortal boy toy turning into his forever partner. Or they can go the sitcom route of one REALLY wanting the luv, and the other half pissed off they're stuck with one another. (this last one kinda seems like it'd suck for everyone though) Perhaps Jafar might decide that the only way to not live in a personal hell this close to his dreams getting fulfilled, means he has to want Jake the way Jake wants Jafar. But that still leaves Majid. I was a little annoyed with the reinsertion of Majid before in the last chapter, he felt a little flat to me, either a half cock tease or a jibbering spazz until Jafar overwrote him, which just made him even MORE one dimensional! But! He might just be Jafar's salvation now. He's Jake's love slave and he can easily be used to wish Jafar free. Unless Majid remembers how dangerous Djinn are, or regains enough semblance of self to wish selfishly. Jafar has been playing with Majid's mind already, what's some more?
7/20/20, 11:13 PM
No!!! i mean Yes!!! ummm??? I don't know how to fell about this...
7/20/20, 10:47 PM
Unf. I loved this idea, and loved the ongoing attraction between Xander and Charlie. More please!
7/20/20, 9:51 PM
Well done, hot, dirty but also a little tender as well. Another winner for sure!
SionOfMerlin
7/20/20, 9:45 PM
It was a very hard sell to get any attention for our charlie, for that reason, Axon. And yes, expect more HPMOR :D
7/20/20, 9:33 PM
Oh boys! I hope you're going to like the next chapter.
7/20/20, 9:09 PM
Loved this!
7/20/20, 8:48 PM
nice, the plot thickens. I hope this story continues
Nutiper
7/20/20, 8:34 PM
Another possible way to complicate things for Jafar is to have Jake realize how, in their shared fantasy of Jafar being all-powerful, Jake is totally absent from the picture. And he could confront Jafar about it. And if Jafar says something like "why, you'll simply be one of my *many* adoring slaves," Jake could decide that's not good enough for him and wish to be Jafar's favorite. Becoming Jafar's favorite (favorite slave? favorite fucktoy? how would Jafar interrpet this?) wouldn't be all fun and games, since it *is* Jafar. But it could be one way to add an interesting aspect to Jafar's desires while keeping Jake a main character in the story, and still giving Jafar a path to world domination.
7/20/20, 7:49 PM
the difficult thing would be keeping the story from stalling out if Jafar gets too powerful too fast. perhaps one more road block from an ineptly worded wish from Jake (he still has two left) like, Jake loves Jafar, he wants Jafar to rule the world, but he also WANTS Jafar. We've already proven that Jake's hedonism is strong enough to corrupt Jafar's power lust, why not let it happen again? Jake could wish that Jafar could take over the world without wishing for Jafar's freedom, which leaves Jafar nearly all powerful, but still bound to Jake. Now he would just have to convince Jake to make a third wish to free him or when Jake wishes a third time it will send Jafar back to his lamp.