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7/17/20, 6:45 AM
I am surprised no one said the same about it being discriminating on Christians ans to non-Christian Transformation kind of Hypocrisy for it only to be said on Mormons, when any other religion there is no complains... just saying
Anonymous
7/17/20, 6:36 AM
I think I saw this image, :) (I think it's merman, but my english is not the best either.) Well, I publish nothing for a few month, and then I tend to write a dump of several chapters I wrote in a few weeks, so I understand the feeling of not publishing often. Ah yes, can understand, I'm trying to think of something to write something for that series since a few month, barely got anything. Right now, I'm just trying to compile every info given trough the chapters, so I have a clear description of the characters, and write them in a coherent way.
7/17/20, 6:29 AM
Is the story switching first-person narrators in each section? I was just so confused trying to keep track of all these characters and the complex mythology and (I think) the shifting perspectives.
7/17/20, 5:56 AM
Ohhh, that sounds like a great idea to me :) A good way to get a different perspective x3 The positive stories are very interesting, especially since they are not the most frequent in this small world of hypno-kink. This fetish certainly favors stories about forced relationships about theft of will, unexpected or clueless hypnotism, or brainwash. I enjoy that I can't complain, hahaha. But precisely because of this when a benevolent, friendly or romantic hypnosis story appears, I really enjoy it. That is why I liked your story so much :) Yes, I know Somnefarious, I really love his art and style :) (In fact a long time ago I commissioned an image from him, about a boy being hypnotized by a merboy (merman? Mermaid? Sorry my english isn't perfect xD) he posted it on his twitter. I've thought about writing a story about it.) Even so I must learn to summarize, it would help me to publish more often xD Oh yeah. That chapter :) It really was a lot of fun to write. Actually I almost managed to complete a continuation of that chapter (I would say it's 85% complete) but I got stuck and didn't continue writing :P I'm waiting for some inspiration to continue that chapter. xD
Anonymous
7/17/20, 5:32 AM
That was pretty hot!
7/17/20, 5:19 AM
Great story and amazing premise. Would love more of this if you wrote more
Johnthedoe
7/17/20, 5:08 AM
Don't worry I still have all my design outline info. I won't just be cutting the end off though. Without the challenge limiting everything I can fully stretch it back out into what it was originally. The problem I had was that the story rapidly grew to the point it broke all but one rule of the contest. Supernatural theme: Check Single Submission: Not Happening 10k words or less: LOL we won't even be off the bus at 10k If I'd caught the problem sooner I could've put Wet Dogs on hold and whipped up a replacement entry which fit within the rules but I didn't and so the whole thing turned into a massive mess because I had to try and figuratively squeeze a whale into a shot glass. I'll start restoring it back to how it was originally before editing and continuing it in August after the challenge ends.
Anonymous
7/17/20, 3:39 AM
I feel like I'm in the minority in this, but I want Roger and Mikey. It's also probably too late to put my two cents in at this point since the author has probably finished writing the story.
7/17/20, 3:35 AM
roger and phil, please.
7/17/20, 1:26 AM
Looking forward to more in this universe, it's a hot one!