Recent Comments

8/23/20, 8:38 PM
What a nice surprise (and posted on my birthday, no less)! I hope you continue this. For one thing, I'd like to know what's up with the flashing sunglasses (and why they could still see the motel clerk winking while he was wearing sunglasses).
Zac
8/23/20, 8:20 PM
Great sequel! Looking forward to more (I hope).
Anonymous
8/23/20, 8:00 PM
the tags are inaccurate and it didn't have a satisfying build up or end. also seemed kind of dumb.
Jun 7, 2020
Drake Nightstrom
8/23/20, 7:22 PM
I love the dynamic of this story, and the mechanic of the flash. Gives it a sort of hypnoitc vibe but nothing specifically stated as such. I hope you write another like this.
Joejvegas
8/23/20, 6:27 PM
Loved the blog style and slow transformation. i have been slowly transformed these past 6 years into an obedient hypnoslave for Master. i appreciate stories from/about others whose lives have improved through hypnosis and a loving Master.
Anonymous
8/23/20, 5:46 PM
great work
8/23/20, 5:05 PM
will we see part 2 soon?
Aug 22, 2020
pmk
8/23/20, 2:27 PM
This was great! Very well written and imaginative. I would love to see more.
8/23/20, 1:33 PM
Wow at first I was a little hard pressed to find enough time to dive into reading this story but you really didn't waste a word. Good world building, nice descriptions, good pacing ^.^ glad I found time finally Haha
Anonymous
8/23/20, 12:48 PM
In essence the evil corporation behaved like one would in the real world. Even so, this ruins the story because it doesnt make you want to deal with a bad end again and thus any of your other writings. it has no hook.