Recent Comments

8/23/20, 1:33 PM
Wow at first I was a little hard pressed to find enough time to dive into reading this story but you really didn't waste a word. Good world building, nice descriptions, good pacing ^.^ glad I found time finally Haha
Anonymous
8/23/20, 12:48 PM
In essence the evil corporation behaved like one would in the real world. Even so, this ruins the story because it doesnt make you want to deal with a bad end again and thus any of your other writings. it has no hook.
Aug 23, 2020
Oddballs
8/23/20, 9:54 AM
Very interesting and intriguing concept. All I would say though is that the writing style and structure can use some improvement. Personally I felt that attention to detail needed more articulation and wording; the on-going procession was a bit too basic for what I usually go for. But overall, this was an inspired piece that sparked a few hot chords with me - had me wanting to see the other modes are like, I was really fond of the gay horny fratboy style he took on.
Nov 26, 2007
8/23/20, 8:51 AM
Found this story a second time around and can now appreciate the nice, tight writing.
8/23/20, 8:49 AM
A wonderful ride, I loved it.
Aug 23, 2020
8/23/20, 7:29 AM
Wow I really like this! Love sexy dudes being turned into robots!
8/23/20, 7:24 AM
id like to request, please have more time for Bob's slavery again! would love to see an older man enslaved!
8/23/20, 7:17 AM
It's a quick and hot story, and the premise is very interesting! As Hypnothrill, there's a lot of back stories that seem to be still in the dark and worth exploring. Hope you intend on pursuing more into this plot...I feel it could become something much more exciting than just this one-off story!
8/23/20, 6:55 AM
I feel humbled and honoured to be mentioned by another fellow author, thanks for the shout out Behaven! ;) This series has been fantastic so far and you've got stuff that checks off a lot of boxes for me, so I've enjoyed it a lot! :) Keep it up and looking forward to read more of this story or other new work from you!
Anonymous
8/23/20, 6:25 AM
this is a really hot story! brody needs to be made to go naked... and shaved... in front of his father. His father needs to shave him and keep him shaved.