Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/23/20, 8:00 PM
the tags are inaccurate and it didn't have a satisfying build up or end. also seemed kind of dumb.
Jun 7, 2020
Drake Nightstrom
8/23/20, 7:22 PM
I love the dynamic of this story, and the mechanic of the flash. Gives it a sort of hypnoitc vibe but nothing specifically stated as such. I hope you write another like this.
Joejvegas
8/23/20, 6:27 PM
Loved the blog style and slow transformation. i have been slowly transformed these past 6 years into an obedient hypnoslave for Master. i appreciate stories from/about others whose lives have improved through hypnosis and a loving Master.
Anonymous
8/23/20, 5:46 PM
great work
8/23/20, 5:05 PM
will we see part 2 soon?
Aug 22, 2020
pmk
8/23/20, 2:27 PM
This was great! Very well written and imaginative. I would love to see more.
8/23/20, 1:33 PM
Wow at first I was a little hard pressed to find enough time to dive into reading this story but you really didn't waste a word. Good world building, nice descriptions, good pacing ^.^ glad I found time finally Haha
Anonymous
8/23/20, 12:48 PM
In essence the evil corporation behaved like one would in the real world. Even so, this ruins the story because it doesnt make you want to deal with a bad end again and thus any of your other writings. it has no hook.
Aug 23, 2020
Oddballs
8/23/20, 9:54 AM
Very interesting and intriguing concept. All I would say though is that the writing style and structure can use some improvement. Personally I felt that attention to detail needed more articulation and wording; the on-going procession was a bit too basic for what I usually go for. But overall, this was an inspired piece that sparked a few hot chords with me - had me wanting to see the other modes are like, I was really fond of the gay horny fratboy style he took on.
Nov 26, 2007
8/23/20, 8:51 AM
Found this story a second time around and can now appreciate the nice, tight writing.