Recent Comments

7/13/20, 12:55 PM
This is a really interesting concept! You write dialogue very well, and I loved the idea of the story. The descriptions were also really engaging and hot. There did seem to be some naming confusion and the story would benefit from organizing your paragraphs and paragraph breaks a bit more. Lastly, I sort of wish that we had seen the characters react to and live with each change a bit more -- the pacing was a bit fast for me. Great work!
7/13/20, 11:40 AM
Your back!!! And I'm super interested in what is happening! Honestly, I'm okay with you taking your time, even if I do admit a year is a bit long... Actually, I'm more interested in the four other brothers than the dad! I wonder what they act like.
7/13/20, 11:40 AM
will we see more?
7/13/20, 11:21 AM
> I think this is one of the best series you have written. > Thank you! What I'd intended to be a Summer Serial ended up being an entire novel. Its length even intimidates ME at times -- I hadn't read it in a few years and when I was debating putting it on GSS, I went through it critically. I'm pleased to say that I still like it -- there's a few moments I'd play with (mostly language, not plot), but on the whole, I think it's strong. (Pardon the pun.) We're not even halfway through, yet -- WAY more to cum!
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7/13/20, 9:53 AM
> For some reason, I was expecting the gym bunnies to use the trigger phrase on him. > You're a little ahead of me, but at least there's a twist...
7/13/20, 9:51 AM
> I don’t know why, but the walk with the backpack and the mirrored shades really fuckin’ did it for me. > Probably because you've dreamed of the same moment I sure have...
7/13/20, 9:24 AM
Really enjoyed this, great job. I'll add my voice to people asking for a sequel. Personally I'd love to see David starting to love his new way of life, and maybe converting someone else to join the herd
7/13/20, 8:09 AM
Nice. For some reason, I was expecting the gym bunnies to use the trigger phrase on him. Glad it was Woody!