Recent Comments

8/21/20, 11:31 PM
Once again, such a nice work! I enjoyed every paragraph, every scene, every dialog. I wasn't expecting Jake to shapeshift, but I should have learned by now, you are full of surprises... very pleasant surprises! I can't wait to see where this goes next! I hope you'll continue to write and I hope there are many more chapters to come and many more stories to come as well. Keep up the good work ;-)
8/21/20, 11:27 PM
yes! Lovely to see you posting again! yes, yes yes!
Anonymous
8/21/20, 11:17 PM
OMG, this is soo good!! Thank you so much for writing this! I mainly go to this site to enjoy big-sub-small-top stories, but never did i know that i also enjoy skillfully written identity theft story! the slow but sure manipulation as well as the rise to power from cabin boy to officer makes my little buddy hard throughout reading this!! =) thanks again! I will be sure to regularly check for your work!
8/21/20, 10:36 PM
Owen needs vision and a big screen smart TV stat. he could ruin ALL of the fun! but NO... that's making the game too easy... I like this 'long haul' play that Jake's got going on. I am SO here for this series and you continue to deliver excellently each installment!
8/21/20, 9:40 PM
so the balloon lead to the self inflation, the measuring tape led to the "snake" growth. simple household items leading to changes... need to find connect something finding clothes for the behemoth, and maybe something less to lead to the expansion of the property so it's more fitting to Richard's current build
Anonymous
8/21/20, 9:38 PM
super hot. hope theres more
8/21/20, 8:54 PM
will we see a new part soon?
Anonymous
8/21/20, 8:40 PM
loved this!
8/21/20, 8:13 PM
Would love to see more of Benji! I echo the comment above that would be super hot
8/21/20, 7:38 PM
Really enjoyed it. I like this version of corrupted Peter, he's being the dominant one but he's not being super aggressive about it. Symbiotes, mind control, and a protagonist who is becoming more powerful is definitely pushing the right buttons for me. Looking forward to the next chapter.