Recent Comments

8/20/20, 6:04 AM
Well, I can edit the story to bring it back, guess I'm gonna do it right now. But even with the first published version of this chapter, there was 1. start training Daniel. 2. take revenge on the neighbors and 3. Maybe there is something to do with Will. Now, 2 and 3 are inverted. I just haven't used clear numbers to signifies the choices. Never did, so why is the remarks coming only now?
8/20/20, 5:34 AM
This is INCREDIBLE! I love inflation and musclegut stories. Amazing stuff! :)
mikem
8/20/20, 4:41 AM
Hot story.. Well written, hot subjects. would luv to see more. thanks.
8/20/20, 4:16 AM
Okay, I finally got over my confusion! The name Alexei really threw me, because it's definitely a man's name, and when combined with a thick Slavic accent barking orders, I kept picturing a male Russian bodybuilder whenever I saw Alexei's name.
Drake Nightstrom
8/20/20, 4:02 AM
@Cutlerfan I am glad you liked it. I wanted a way for the reader to sort of know something was happening without having to write the exact words every time it came up.
Anonymous
8/20/20, 3:52 AM
is there going to be more of this story?
Jun 13, 2017
8/20/20, 2:17 AM
Just went back to refresh myself on this story. Wow! Love it!
8/20/20, 1:37 AM
What a chapter ........ I NEED to read more .....
8/20/20, 12:36 AM
i like the slow seduction and corruption of characters
JRL
8/20/20, 12:16 AM
this is one of the hottest things i have ever read. thank you.