Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:38 PM
awesome!!! really looking forward to the next installment.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:21 PM
The little details are great (e.g., how Blaine closes the door, him texting "Mr." before his name). Appreciate how much attention is paid to the writing.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:19 PM
I came into this chapter expecting Levi to be taken down, but I’d never have expected the CCTV induction. Pure genius! Really looking forward to seeing where the third part takes our intrepid gang of victims, especially once you throw a second hypnotist into the mix
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:09 PM
The fact that I absolutely hate your villainous characters, and you manage to stir genuine emotion in me when all I'm trying to do is get off is a testament to how good of a writer you are. Let's hope the hypnotherapist friend manages to save the day.
8/16/20, 7:52 PM
very sweet! i love it.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 7:47 PM
This is so good! Love the transformation. Can't wait to see where you take this in the last chapter.
Swizzington
8/16/20, 7:10 PM
To be honest, this story doesn't really dive deeply into Blaine's motivations. But I am definitely considering writing more stories (possibly a prequel) with the character, so that might be explained in future :-)
8/16/20, 7:00 PM
Swizzington, I entirely agree with your comment. Write what you want to see put out there, not to please a fickle audience. I have read a few of your stories, and I enjoy them no matter how they resolve themselves. I am curious as to why our young hypnotist is so cold-blooded, but I suppose that will be explained in future chapters.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:23 PM
Please please *please* continue this - this is one of the hottest stories on here.
8/16/20, 5:45 PM
I love his internal conflicts and thoughts. Thoughtful and amazing!