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8/14/20, 10:10 PM
Easily one of my favorites you've written. Well done :)
8/14/20, 10:01 PM
It's hot. Especially when Collin makes the jock slave to the nerd and the jock is aware of it. For a moment I thought the nerd would be the slave because of Collin's feeling nauseated by him and wanting to slap him. It's really hot to have a role reversal.
8/14/20, 9:59 PM
Just read this again -- still a super hot scene
Anonymous
8/14/20, 9:58 PM
oh man im loving this
8/14/20, 9:33 PM
Nice story! I think the use of 1st person narration works really well here.
Anonymous
8/14/20, 8:55 PM
More.... MORE
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8/14/20, 7:38 PM
i can't get enough of your hot smoky stories! Thank you stud!
8/14/20, 6:22 PM
Hot Story! Keep it going!
8/14/20, 6:07 PM
Being a long time reader, though admittedly a first time commenter, I think this chapter was an absolute breath of fresh air. The nature of this site and stories it contains lends itself to hyper focusing only on the sexual aspects, but I find that its personally best when the psychology of the characters is explored in greater depth. Needless to say that sort of story telling when confined to the parameters of this particularly niche genre is a bit hard to do, but when you take a more realistic -if admittedly still exaggerated- approach to the control, you have much more room to navigate that landscape. You've managed an absolutely phenomenal bit of character writing here, and if it weren't for the core subject matter at hand I'd seriously recommend looking into publishing it separately. Aside from a good deal of erotic pleasure you've given me a satisfying read and a look into the minds of some fascinating characters. Which is all an overly long way of saying thank you for the story and I look forward to more.