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EJG
8/13/20, 7:37 PM
I am so far in 'cum',that sin shall pluck on sin, tear falling pity,dwells not in this eye.. my apologies to Shakespeare
8/13/20, 4:26 PM
Perhaps, Perhaps, Perhaps...
8/13/20, 4:03 PM
I like a lot of the imagery where you're describing the abandoned Manchester and Jafar's army of muscle zombies. I just feel like you skipped a few good story beats by skipping ahead to the moment where Marcus is the only freewilled man left. To me, it would be hotter if he was part of a small band of resisters who were getting picked off one by one as they succumbed to Jafar's power. But that's just my preference; this is still a very hot story, and I'm excited to see where it goes next!
Willie Cici
8/13/20, 2:38 PM
This is great. I can see follow-up stories or it just stands on its own merits. Keep writing. Always good to have new talented writers on the site. As for the comment above mine, it only proves my long-standing point: it's not in the writing; it's in the editing. I'll bet you re-read this story a dozen times, and an error still slips in. Don't let it bother you. It happens.
Davesub
8/13/20, 2:10 PM
I got to say, this one has me dreaming about nipples. OMG so hot.
8/13/20, 1:43 PM
Definitely up my alley. I liked the mixture of weight gain both from indulgence and from sex. I did wish there had been a little bit more with Alan's changes since he ended up coming back at the end, but it still hit all the right notes.
8/13/20, 1:11 PM
wow didn't expect that creature to be behind the stuffing <3
Aug 13, 2020
8/13/20, 12:16 PM
Lovely, lovely, thanks for pandering to me, I mean, writing this story kickit! Love you bby. <3
Aug 13, 2020
8/13/20, 12:02 PM
Decent Story, I'm a sucker for a good Cigar. Thanks pozz for "convincing me" to read it.
Mitch_CoRob
8/13/20, 11:55 AM
I really liked this story. I think this was hot and well done. I hope you continue with gainer stories if this one is done!