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8/13/20, 10:28 PM
I love stories that feature reality bending suggestions. I'm sitting on easily 30+ unfinished stories that feature this but have a hard time finishing any of them. Some day I'll either need to finish at least one or find someone willing to collaborate with me to get some done. If you or anyone else is interested in that let me know
8/13/20, 9:37 PM
I like this -- it tells a complete story but gives a nice set-up for sequels. Nice job!
8/13/20, 8:18 PM
Aw yas, das good shyte.
EJG
8/13/20, 7:37 PM
I am so far in 'cum',that sin shall pluck on sin, tear falling pity,dwells not in this eye.. my apologies to Shakespeare
8/13/20, 4:26 PM
Perhaps, Perhaps, Perhaps...
8/13/20, 4:03 PM
I like a lot of the imagery where you're describing the abandoned Manchester and Jafar's army of muscle zombies. I just feel like you skipped a few good story beats by skipping ahead to the moment where Marcus is the only freewilled man left. To me, it would be hotter if he was part of a small band of resisters who were getting picked off one by one as they succumbed to Jafar's power. But that's just my preference; this is still a very hot story, and I'm excited to see where it goes next!
Willie Cici
8/13/20, 2:38 PM
This is great. I can see follow-up stories or it just stands on its own merits. Keep writing. Always good to have new talented writers on the site. As for the comment above mine, it only proves my long-standing point: it's not in the writing; it's in the editing. I'll bet you re-read this story a dozen times, and an error still slips in. Don't let it bother you. It happens.
Davesub
8/13/20, 2:10 PM
I got to say, this one has me dreaming about nipples. OMG so hot.
8/13/20, 1:43 PM
Definitely up my alley. I liked the mixture of weight gain both from indulgence and from sex. I did wish there had been a little bit more with Alan's changes since he ended up coming back at the end, but it still hit all the right notes.
8/13/20, 1:11 PM
wow didn't expect that creature to be behind the stuffing <3