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Spiral Fan
8/10/20, 12:47 AM
Creative and hot as fuck!! love the idea of game that can slowly change guy into queer. Will read the next chapters!
Bbeef
8/9/20, 7:39 PM
really a cool one!
8/9/20, 6:11 PM
I'm doing well but I've gotten a bit busy with other things. Hope you all are safe and sound too
8/9/20, 6:10 PM
Hey team, glad to see peole are still reading this. I'm slowly inching towards a new release to this story (with a heavy focus on the Chief). I've been hit by a sudden case of writer's block though. To the newest anon, and anyone else out there, if you want to do a collaboration or a commission, feel free to comment on any of my stories on here, or message me through my GSS profile. I'd love to find some way to get the ball rolling
8/9/20, 6:07 PM
This has a wonderful potential for a series. I think the grammar and spelling distracted me severely so I would encourage you to ask Martin or one of the more prolific authors to review and correct BUT NOT CHANGE the story. It must be yours and what a wonderful idea this is. Very original and sympathetic. The more potential and twists I see , the more I'm inspired to read. Very original and enjoyable!!
8/9/20, 2:56 PM
I just posted a beautiful illustration my friend Max Spragovsky did of this story on the [FORUM](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/king-rex-illustration/1773). Please look -- it's just awesome!
8/9/20, 2:28 PM
Fascinating developments. Please continue!
8/9/20, 2:15 PM
too many long sentences and paragraphs, it's hard for me to read. A shame, since based on the tags I would've loved this story
8/9/20, 2:11 PM
Great Story! Keep going!
8/9/20, 1:34 PM
no offense but your story has too many mistakes. it's readable but it could be better. the dialogue sounds so unnatural; it's like one of those supervillain scenes where the hero is captured and is about to die by the hands of a laser beam or sharks. that's just my opinion