Recent Comments

8/9/20, 2:56 PM
I just posted a beautiful illustration my friend Max Spragovsky did of this story on the [FORUM](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/king-rex-illustration/1773). Please look -- it's just awesome!
8/9/20, 2:28 PM
Fascinating developments. Please continue!
8/9/20, 2:15 PM
too many long sentences and paragraphs, it's hard for me to read. A shame, since based on the tags I would've loved this story
8/9/20, 2:11 PM
Great Story! Keep going!
8/9/20, 1:34 PM
no offense but your story has too many mistakes. it's readable but it could be better. the dialogue sounds so unnatural; it's like one of those supervillain scenes where the hero is captured and is about to die by the hands of a laser beam or sharks. that's just my opinion
8/9/20, 6:22 AM
please don't make darren a top, its rare to find stories with a old jock bully being the bottom, I would love to see darren becoming more and more submissive
8/9/20, 6:02 AM
After reading your story I got interested and was looking for some other stories with similar topic. But reading just a few I got mostly disappointed, sometimes even appalled. What I really like is that your story (aside from being super hot) is gentle and totally playful. 💜
8/9/20, 5:45 AM
Fantastic concept and writing. Will be thinking about this one for a while.
8/9/20, 3:44 AM
Shot two loads by the end of your story. You are a creative writer and very descriptive! Felt like I was there in the room with everyone. Storyline was hot and I need to find that salve!
Aug 4, 2020
8/9/20, 3:41 AM
I loved it. Will there be more chapters? :)