Recent Comments

8/10/20, 6:34 AM
A great story that definitely gave me "Star Kid" vibes in the beginning, but the grammar and spelling errors were too persistent to ignore. Your idea and descriptions are all great, but this needs some heavy cleaning up.
8/10/20, 6:20 AM
I love the end!!
Anonymous
8/10/20, 5:23 AM
This was so hot!! Maybe in a later scene julio can pick up that priest again and get a little closer ;) i can't wait for the next chapter.
8/10/20, 5:06 AM
This is getting more enthralling with each installment, keep up the god wrk!
8/10/20, 4:06 AM
Nice! I like the way we get an embedded narrative with the priest telling the erotic fantasy he has about his parishioners.
8/10/20, 3:24 AM
Been enjoying your contributions so far this year, all have been focused. fresh, new ideas, and well written, but this on is my favorite. There's something about the idea of 'is there something on my face' that really has a lot of potential.
Spiral Fan
8/10/20, 1:06 AM
Waiting for the climax where the game finish and completely change their identity. And they make an orgy copulation!
Spiral Fan
8/10/20, 12:47 AM
Creative and hot as fuck!! love the idea of game that can slowly change guy into queer. Will read the next chapters!
Bbeef
8/9/20, 7:39 PM
really a cool one!
8/9/20, 6:11 PM
I'm doing well but I've gotten a bit busy with other things. Hope you all are safe and sound too