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6/30/20, 12:26 AM
I second the dog request (but then, look at our profile names) Good story. Thanks for sharing
6/30/20, 12:09 AM
I kinda love the super natural elements peppered throughout. would love to see how things happen next!
Ken
6/29/20, 11:15 PM
Your story just keeps getting better and better.
FuckThatCop
6/29/20, 10:28 PM
I know I shouldn't like this, but sadly, I feel kinda ashamed to admit that I did. A lot. What the heck is wrong with me? It's like a fucking guilty pleasure.
Anonymous
6/29/20, 10:01 PM
Watching the cumulative, inevitable changes was a real turn on, even though it was scary to see him losing himself to lust. The part about the knowledge draining out of his head while other knowledge poured in was particularly moving.
Anonymous
6/29/20, 9:59 PM
Watching the cumulative, inevitable changes was a real turn on, even though it was scary to see him losing himself to lust. The part about the knowledge draining out of his head while other knowledge poured in was particularly moving.
Jun 28, 2020
6/29/20, 9:51 PM
Greetings Master your boy Derek please I beg you to chat with me I'd like to know what you like from a potential sub ?I'm genuine my email address is gaffneyderek307@gmail.com love your stories
mdlftr
6/29/20, 9:42 PM
Chiling! The karmic/magical balance at play here sends chills up and down one's spine! Too bad the guys didn't get a chance to be persuaded of the shortcomings of their points of view before they BECAME those points of view! Scary! I especially hate the dumbing down -
6/29/20, 9:24 PM
Such a sweet story! I like how Dave tries to be a better person for Nate.
6/29/20, 9:14 PM
Lol...I'm starting to think that Edlam has subliminals written into his stories that gets us all cluelessly conditioned to become hooked on them, and then leaves us all hanging desperately and craving for more...all at his whim! Are we all part of a bigger plot you're playing out here, Edlam? Haha! ;-) In all seriousness, you're putting some great work, so all the wait is definitely worth it! Keep it up sir!