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Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:46 PM
very romantic and beautifully written
Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:34 PM
He ended up so hard and horny that he would fuck anything!! I've been like that without the drugs!!!
Anonymous
6/22/20, 2:24 PM
Ehhhh!! Typical!
6/22/20, 2:10 PM
I admire Nate's resolve. I'd play with the puppy A LOT more. The ending to this chapter made me a little bit sad. I mean, it's a perfectly normal thing to happen after you graduate but the whole soulmate thing makes saying goodbye a lot harder. I hope they figure this out
Anonymous
6/22/20, 12:57 PM
Needs some spelling and grammar cleanup for readability as many sentences run into each other.
RainOnMe
6/22/20, 11:31 AM
^ I agree. Phil should remember his only purpose is to serve his master. I also think there should be more foot fetish elements involved. As for Michael, he needs to become their new pet puppy. He will forget about his old life and realize that he’s never been happier than to be a good muscular pup. This will teach him not get involved in Phil and Roger’s love life. Have Michael walk on all fours, wear a collar and leash, as well as eat and drink from a dog bowl.
6/22/20, 10:35 AM
I see, thank you, I hope to see the new, gay, uncle
6/22/20, 9:50 AM
I plan on continuing Luke's story with the next few chapters with other people grabbing the coin and making wishes or people passing off the coin to their friends. Might be a couple days for another chapter while I plan it out. I half assed the first couple chapters and I want to do better with each addition :)
6/22/20, 8:29 AM
Nice! I was looking forward to this all week. Looks like we're really setting up the hard, high school couple questions eh? I'm interested to see where this goes. For me though, I want to start seeing Nate actually figure out for himself whether he likes Dave or not. He's been spending so many chapters being wishy washy about it and I would wish that he could just make a decision already. But that's how I feel. Perhaps my favorite parts of the series is when Dave enters that tranced out state whenever he follows commands. I really like tranced out jocks with goofy faces. Anyway, great chapter and I'm glad you're having fun writing these. I don't think its filler at all, but more of a slower paced, set up chapter. Which are always needed