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M.B.Daddy
6/19/20, 5:45 AM
Anyone else was expecting Aaron to be with the ghost of the guy that James had his one night stand with?
6/19/20, 3:28 AM
This is simply a masterful exercise of craft. It was a full narrative, with a great structure, elegantly done. The characters felt distinct and driven by complex emotions. And it was deeply romantic in ways that weren't conventional or cliched. It's just a very cool and confident bit of writing. The world building was handled well too - it didn't feel awkward or exposition heavy and the writing didn't feel mannered or archaic despite managing to feel immersed in its setting. I massively enjoyed it, basically. Thanks for writing it and I hope you write a lot more stuff in as many different genres as possible. It was so cool to see a well-written and multi dimensional female character too. i guess for obvious reasons to do with the focus of the site any women often get a bit sidelined. I really appreciated how much more expansive and textured the story felt for including her and giving her a perspective.
6/19/20, 2:36 AM
Wonderful! Love how each of his wishes went wrong. You are quite talented, do more plssss
CLB
6/19/20, 2:03 AM
As someone who has a side that fantasizes about being humiliated / denigrated, i enjoyed the story quite a bit Thanks for sharing it
Seattle Dom4MuscleSub
6/19/20, 2:03 AM
Continue the story. His boyfriend has started wishing, so now he has to end up as a big, muscular, furry bottom. Tiny dick, big muscles, furry, and a belly. just like his top likes.
nycboot
6/19/20, 1:43 AM
slave abdamelek: I love the statement because it shows the slave mindset, for example, that servitude is liberation. I've known quite a few slaves whose lives were kinda messed up, and their Masters took over and set them on a good path. So in that context, being controlled for one's own protection is a recognition of the slave ethos. So what makes the quote amusing and ironic is that the character challenges that statement - clearly he is going to discover what control is. A great way to foreshadow.
6/19/20, 1:34 AM
What an awesome story!
6/19/20, 1:30 AM
Enjoy the unique deceptive ploys in sending the reader along with the character
Nex Fan
6/19/20, 1:04 AM
my problem with your story is the fact that it feels unoriginal. the idea of the personality change via name change works well but it feels like youve straight up just took it from KNT frat which is disappointing because Nex's story is so good and i just feel like im reading a spin off. try drawing from more originality because it just seems too similar.
Anonymous
6/19/20, 12:13 AM
Seriously... This should be a movie!