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6/13/20, 5:40 PM
Phew, thanks! I literally haven't done any creative writing since 2002, and never erotica. But as an avid consumer of smutty fiction over the years, I guess I internalized a lot of the dos and don'ts :) TBH, I originally wanted to write something just based on the gotta get fucked/can't cum/ball growth thing, but needed something a little extra for it to make sense on this particular website. Your Truth or Dare idea seemed like a great entry point, and now I'm going to have to figure out how to flesh out the other characters and give them meaningful stuff to do while still centering it around Fareed and his experience.
6/13/20, 5:06 PM
Awesome and amazing, I loved that chapter, you have nothing to be worried about with your writing, that was great! I liked how you changed who was giving out the questions. Can't wait to see what you have to come.
Anonymous
6/13/20, 4:13 PM
This is getting hotter with every chapter. I'm loving this series.
Willie Cici
6/13/20, 4:11 PM
Diolch, JockMeBro. Dyma fy ymgais at hiwmor.
6/13/20, 3:45 PM
defnydd doniol iawn o'r Gymraeg
mbblover
6/13/20, 3:12 PM
READS REALLY REALLY PROMISING! I LOVE LOVE LOVE a great straight drop dead gorgeous musclebound superhero captured, conquered and converted by a "lesser" a "beta" quote villian story/storyline!... this 1st chapter reminds me of the great superhero stories of the great writer kyle cicero!.... i hope to read many many more chapters of this story, take your time i say and don't make it "campy" but make it how should i say realistic and serious mixed with dirty kinky pervy wickedness! love the whole power control role reversal aspect of this and other stories! thanks so far!..
jockboy111
6/13/20, 2:40 PM
100% agree with you on typos, i do have a lot of them and probably need someone to edit but i don't have anyone to edit. Also theres going to be some dumbing down so expect more typos
Anonymous
6/13/20, 2:10 PM
Suggest getting someone to edit the story. While you've got a distinctly different voice for each character, a college professor is not going to have so many typos.
6/13/20, 2:09 PM
@Jaybird: May you remember the grammar correction for me!? Of cause you did. ;-)
EJG
6/13/20, 1:31 PM
'Happily Married' or not, in the realms of pure fantasy,i can't see why the bad boys can't win for a while,and even the most innocent of victims fail. It's hot for me at least,the fantasies of being used by str8 guys. I have not enjoyed a(n opening chapter?) story,since i enjoyed HavenTesla's New Years Eve,and that poor (str8 & originally homophobic) fella had a whole year of being abused by str8 guys as well as gay.