Recent Comments

6/7/20, 5:34 PM
I saw MST and my first instinct was to read the story right away since I know they never disappoint. So glad that you posted again! I will be reading this shortly
Jun 7, 2020
6/7/20, 4:29 PM
Thanks for the comments Hypnothrill and soft satin. And thank you JockForBrains for helping me proofreading. I got the inspiration from the many GayForPay-photos that clutter up the seachresults when you try searching for gay hypno and mind control photos. Now I have retroactively given those irrelevant photos a backstory :-)
macguy
6/7/20, 3:59 PM
Great story glad to see back writing again hopefully more to came
6/7/20, 3:08 PM
Great story, love the spring water element. kinda kinky, kinda fun!
6/7/20, 3:04 PM
I enjoy Pine's darker side. I am excited to see if it can coexist with Leo on the loose. And I am a fan of coach Geoff already,cant wait to see more of him. Btw,I wouldn't be surprised of Leo went to play with Max. It did sound like that
6/7/20, 3:01 PM
Hot, steamy story with a lot of sex. Excellent reading!
6/7/20, 2:56 PM
Great storyline and terrific sex scene. I was hard the whole time.....
6/7/20, 2:50 PM
Loved the switch from "working" women to men (and more $$$). Gotta read more...
Jun 7, 2020
soft satin
6/7/20, 2:49 PM
Thank you like the previous comment I loved the new take and nice righting too, thanks again. SS
6/7/20, 2:12 PM
That was great! And, although I'm not usually a fan of photos with the stories, these really drove home the changes he was undergoing.