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MuscleSon69
6/4/20, 10:54 PM
Each chapter makes me more horny! I'm reading more...
MuscleSon69
6/4/20, 10:44 PM
I'm on the edge of my seat for the next one!
MuscleSon69
6/4/20, 10:38 PM
Outstanding! I was so hard and leaking the whole time while reading it. I want more!!!
6/4/20, 9:59 PM
love this!
6/4/20, 7:54 PM
Yeah this is soooooo freaken hot! Love all the actions. Also really looking forward to Dennis getting a character in game that he and Jese can play around with, that would be really fun. So I have no problem with the NPCs being the current actors I just think that Dennis would never want Jese to put them ahead of say him when it comes to who is in charge. On bestiality that is animals, like actual animals, not anthro beings with human minds and such. I could see the tag Anthro (or furry depending on how he programmed it) but not bestiality since for all there forms they are actually thinking beings and such. This is a gorgeous story. Love the tropes here and the malware and the fun that is going on. Its soooo great.
autoDream
6/4/20, 7:29 PM
If I didn't mention it, Dennis definitely removed the USB. As you've alluded to to, its like a malware installed into Jese's Mindgear. Not only does it let his Star World slip into the modded realm without detection, but it also gives Dennis remote access. Dennis was mostly a bystander in the first two chapters in terms of what was happening in the world.
Anonymous
6/4/20, 7:23 PM
more please. always live a submissive cop
nycboot
6/4/20, 7:16 PM
Damn, I find this story so hot. I almost like the points where the Mindgear puts Jese into a trance more than the sexual parts. I think I found one little discrepancy. In chapter 1, Dennis put a thumb drive in Jese's machine, but it is never mentioned that he removes it. If he had not removed it, I'm sure Jese would have noticed the thumb drive sticking in his machine when he re-entered the room. So, is Dennis's programming like malware that is forever in the game, or is it on the thumb drive (which can be removed if discovered)?
autoDream
6/4/20, 7:06 PM
Removed it. I guess I was thinking that as a non-furry type place it might be necessary. There will most likely be a separation between real world and game. I doubt the naga would be more than a random thought in the back of Jese's mind.