Recent Comments

5/27/20, 2:51 PM
I went ahead and wrote a "remixed" version of this story, inserting the mind control content that I was missing. I'm just waiting for Willie Cici's permission to post it!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:38 PM
I'm not sure it was intentional on the part of the writer, but I think Carlos ended up changed as well, because the alpha all of a sudden seems to be acting like a bottom. I loved it. SAF!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:18 PM
I thought the same as Hypnothrill, but then I read the original. That's where all the mind control is. It's a sequel, of sorts. You have to read the stories together. Having said that, hot!!!!
5/27/20, 12:28 PM
*A masseuse is a female masseur
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/27/20, 12:06 PM
I wish I could go under that easily even though I find speedos distracting & easy to admire.
5/27/20, 11:08 AM
Excellent second installment! Hard to pull off when you think you've finished a story, but you did it.
5/27/20, 11:07 AM
This is excellent, man - I loved it. Well-written too. Good job.
May 26, 2020
Anonymous
5/27/20, 10:32 AM
Easily the most well-written story I've read on here. You wove a story that literally enthralled me, couldn't stop reading
5/27/20, 7:29 AM
This story has very hot imagery, but it skips over a lot of the actual mind control, which for me is the best part. I'd love to do an edit of this where I just work on beefing up the middle sections, starting with the point that Cole and Wyatt discover their teammates naked.
Ky'Ro
5/27/20, 4:43 AM
I'm not usually into cutesy, sappy stories, but this one works for me. You should keep it up! Roger and Phil's chemistry is beyond fire and it actually made my heart flutter when Roger asked him what he thought of him and he actually got a positive response. So how long will the wait for the next chapter be exactly?