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5/19/20, 11:58 AM
Redcoma, Makskin, thank you for the support. As to the uniforms going leather, remember that the mayor is under Ari'seth's control, so ultimately the choice lies with the demon. Furthermore, clothing doesn't mean much to Ari'seth, it's more the marker of his control.
Wolfie
5/19/20, 11:44 AM
Wow this was an incredible finale! I am blown away by your amazing writing skills. Great job! I’m really looking forward for “Stacy’s Dad”.
5/19/20, 11:21 AM
You're right, of course, Hypnothrill. As soon as I posted that I thought of Anthony Trollope's novels and the pre-Victorian 'Frankenstein'. I feel I have followed a chronological pattern in this story. Each episode begins with a present-tense, first person narrative, set seven years in the past, followed by a past-tense narrative set one year ago. Within themselves, each type of narrative is strictly chronological. The reason I have done this is suspense.
5/19/20, 10:56 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far. i cant wait for the next chapter.
TwinkMaster
5/19/20, 10:52 AM
Thanks Josmith for bringing my favorite story back! Please don’t make him feminine! That would be such a turn off. I like that Roger the twink has complete control of this beefy, strong, masculine, straight guy! A few ideas for the next chapter could be: Foot worship: Make Phil an obedient foot slave that loves to massage and lick his master’s feet. Roger’s feet are the only thing Phil craves, it’s his nutrition. While Roger eats dinner, Phil will only be given his master’s feet to suck on and lick. Phil was also be his personal foot stool and will bow whenever he sees his master he will also thank him for letting him be his daddy slave. Pup play: Phil begins to act like the loyal dog he is! He is forced to immediately take his off clothes when alone with Roger and wear only a dog collar and harness. In order for Phil to move around Roger has to walk his new dog with his leash. Phil will only eat and drink from a bowl. Amnesia: You have previously explored this one and it would be hot to expand it. Roger hypnotizes Phil to make him permanently forget about who he was. Phil will be told he was never married or had kids. Instead he was a gay butler who was secretly in love with his young master, Roger. As Phil the hunky butler, his uniform will be fully naked, except for a bowtie and some flip flops. He will cook, clean, open the door for his master, carry his master around, and fully serve Roger and his sexual desires in their new European home. Realization: Phil will see a picture of his wife and kids. This will cause him to snap out of the hypnosis and realize what he’s doing. He says, “wtf is going on? I’m not gay!” Phil will attempt to escape but before he can leave the house Roger immediately says his trigger word and puts him back under. Phil then apologizes in a monotone, zombie-like trance and says, “I’m sorry master, I am your daddy slave, I obey your commands, you control me.” Confrontation: Phil and Roger head back to Stacy’s house to confront his former wife and daughter. Phil will tell his family that he has fallen in love with his son in law and will be marrying him and moving to Europe. He steals his former wife’s ring and bends down on his knee to ask Roger to marry him in front of his former family. They are seen holding hands the entire time. Edging/Dick Worship: Phil will only cum when his master tells him to. He will also be forced to wear a chastity cage on his cock. Phil will become obsessed with pleasuring Roger’s cock and balls. He will constantly feel an urge to suck his master dick. He wants to be a good daddy slave and make his master happy. Once again, thank you for deciding to bring this story back! I hope these ideas give you some material for the next chapter. Stay safe and healthy!
5/19/20, 7:58 AM
Talking of men in leather, maybe (once the whole of the police force have been taken over) the mayor gives the order that there new uniforms are made of leather.
5/19/20, 6:35 AM
yes, let's go to the cells. those perps will have fun with the cops. can't wait for the chief to join in
5/19/20, 6:18 AM
I'm sorry if I'm coming across as prejudiced. I wasn't trying to be discriminatory or oppressing him from publishing his work. I was just trying to say that with what I know about nycboot, I thought that perhaps he might not be the best author to be finishing Wishbone's since his personality and the tone of the series don't match up well. Of course he's more than welcome to take a stab at the ending if he wants to and I will still read it and give it a fair shake and re-evaluate. But with what I know, I'm just stating my apprehension because Bargain is one of my favorite series of this site and I don't want to see it ruined.
5/19/20, 5:25 AM
This is truly a great story. I love men in uniform also leather as well. I can't wait to see the rest of the story that you come up with. Keep up the good hard work.
Anonymous
5/19/20, 5:21 AM
Love it hopefully mr fantastic is up soon. All the fun to be had with his elastic body, and maybe his genius would finally be put to good use like how to get more pleasure than possible