Recent Comments

9/21/25, 4:41 AM
It’s a very well-written story. I look forward to see if it will continue, this gave me the impression of a prologue to an epic novel. I’m not sure if I concur with the thought about, “loyalty being acknowledged.” How is this loyalty being acknowledged when it’s just ‘rewarded’ with prettier, more thorough, enslavement? I would have liked to see the emperor take him aside for a bit, maybe offer him a choice, but it’s not my story to tell and the bit later about the emperor thinking his rule has even lashed free will to serve him frames his arrogance well.
9/20/25, 10:31 PM
Really nice concept that ticks all the boxes for me, would love to see more of this kind of theme explored. Hot, gropable, on display, objectified, massive, muscular, simpler, hypersexualized, BUNNIFIED. Need a benefactor to do this to me…

9/21/25, 1:05 AM
@[brium](/user/show/10011305) thank you! Much appreciated. Just a bit of flash fiction I did a few months ago, but would def expand on.
9/21/25, 1:01 AM
I just read all the chapters, that's so hot ! I can't wait for the next ones
9/21/25, 12:18 AM
Oh wow, another hot chapter. And nowbwe got Kyle and two bonus for the twins. Zekes harem is getting bigger and bigger. I wonder if the daddy is next. But i also dont mind having this current set of harem to have an orgy, especiall fixing Gabe.
9/20/25, 11:45 PM
A perfect short story. Excellent job with the descriptions (Marek's humiliation was hot), and a clever ending that felt completely natural. :muscle:
9/20/25, 11:42 PM
Really enjoying Dak's predicament. Great pacing with building arousal. Will Dan ever figure out what is happening to him - especially once he realizes that with that trigger phrase [__________] he is now helpless to do anything about it?
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9/20/25, 9:27 PM
I LOVED this story!
9/20/25, 7:28 PM
What fun! And well written. It will be interesting to see you continue this. Perhaps with an orc tribe and their human slaves; perhaps the orcs share their humans; perhaps some humans are naughty and the other humans rat them out, because rewards AND punishments will follow. And so on. Bravo!

9/20/25, 7:48 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Hey, I’m glad that you enjoyed it! And I always appreciate when my writing is complimented. I worked hard on this one. I’m definitely interested in continuing this at a later date and I do like your ideas. Thank you for the comment and suggestions!
9/20/25, 6:21 PM
Kyle's fall, surrender, and transformation was SOOOOOO HOT! :fire: He literally never stood a chance. Zeke had his number right from the start. I'm going to have to keep stroking to this chapter while I wait for the next one! :sweat_drops:
9/20/25, 2:56 PM
Very hot story you should continue it on into Henry's college experience.