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11/16/25, 8:34 AM
Given that this wasn't the ending you originally planned for, I am thoroughly impressed that you managed to turn the ending completely around in this final chapter without it feeling forced. [SPOILER FOR KEY PLOT POINT INCOMING] The part that really amazed me was when you flipped the story around using the double entrende of "full moon", which I felt was so particularly clever, unexpected and funny that I doubled over laughing! 🤣 Even though I didn't feel you had to change your story just to placate us, I'm glad that the boys ended up with a happy and wholesome ending (I've really become a sucker for wholesome stories lol). Bravo for the series ♥️

11/16/25, 8:53 AM
@[hunterlism](/user/show/10060533) Thank you so much ❤️ that really does mean a lot to me . Hehe the ‘full moon’ is my school boy type of humour lol 😂 xx
11/16/25, 7:32 AM
Will there be a continuation to this?
11/16/25, 4:20 AM
Very hot!
11/16/25, 3:49 AM
Thanks for a such hot story! I love the basic premise and plot. My only wish is that there were more detail in all the slave training and control aspects of the story and the fetishes Marlton was taught to love. I absorbed it intellectually but i really wanted to feel what Marlton experienced and felt.
11/16/25, 3:21 AM
Thanks for the new chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if New Nathaniel betrays his creator and tries to kill him). I hope the story doesn't end with no one understanding or discovering anything, and that in a few years the truth will emerge. Carlos will fully remember who he is after being hit by a car and surviving, remembering everything that was done to him, and beginning a plan for revenge. Or something else entirely? But I hope the story doesn't end predictably 😅. I also hope there will be pictures of the story's characters in future chapters, as there were in some of the previous ones.
11/14/25, 8:54 PM
I always wonder what these things that are clearly gay male porn would do to women. The Engineer (another contagious enhancements story with even more profound effects and nanite based changes) had a similar issue. The solution matched the kind of thing that a gay nerd who knew no women would have come up with. It totally sidelined women. It also ignored (mostly because of when it was written) transgender and other related groups. I found that depressing at the time. So what effects is this virus going to have on women? And how is it going to interact with the very specific structure of the vagina, which has erectile structures that are analogous to the corpus cavernosum? Don't complain to me. You wrote it with realistic medical information. 0

11/16/25, 2:42 AM
@[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) I actually completely forgot about this until this moment. Happy to abandon things that remind me of the pandemic, but who knows? As for your question: I may be a gay nerd but not a gold star one -- I've written bi smut, too -- but that's not the audience in Gay Spiral. And of. course I didn't write The Engineer. But as for women, in this case, if I were to guess, it would either cause a futa situation or horrifying deformity that endangered reproduction. But I'm not in a headspace for continuing it.
11/16/25, 12:50 AM
Wow, this is quite a wonderful story! Being friends with your own hero, and then he seduces you, mmmm!
11/15/25, 11:18 PM
This little gem of a story has slipped through the cracks. Its smashing! Enjoy the denial phases in which the tragic hero slowly submits to the will of the evil one. Perhaps in the 4th, 5th.... captain america can have his genetic code intesified. Yes, he gains a nice heft physique but the slight nuance is his inability to control himself in a frenzy unexplored and quite unwieldy bottom boy. Thanks for your story.

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11/15/25, 11:59 PM
@[Tornado](/user/show/973883) Thanks so much!
11/15/25, 11:50 PM
The last story was my favourite. Hope there's more!
11/15/25, 10:18 PM
Fuck yeah that’s a great story. Got me leaking like a broken faucet. More daddy.