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5/13/20, 11:50 PM
nycboot, Sorry for putting you out there in a couple of different ways. I started writing this while I was proctoring exams and before I knew I had this section of the story completed. I was working on part 2 to see if I could combine them together, but thought it better to start off with this and work through days as more cops come under Ari'Seth's control. So please don't feel any pressure from me and my story about completing the ending to *Bargain*; write at your own pace. I look forward to seeing what you come up for the ending. P.S.--Thank you for calling this part of the story lovely
nycboot
5/13/20, 11:09 PM
I'm the one who expressed a desire to complete **[Bargain](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newSeries/show/7680)** (which is one of my favorite stories). I know what will happen but with working from home (and 2 other stories in various states of completion), I wasn't planning on completing it anytime soon. But now that New Guy in Town has offered this lovely entry above, that should prompt me to get moving.
5/13/20, 10:49 PM
Loved it, so erotic in the descriptions of the changes!
5/13/20, 10:44 PM
can you continue please
5/13/20, 10:34 PM
Oh, man, you don't have to worry, you never disappoint us! It is as good as the previous chapters, and it's pure delight to read it again from the beginning to enjoy the full tale! your user name was certainly well chosen, since I'm having a Good time reading you. Thanks a lot for post the updates so fast! you're making the quarantine so enjoyable!
Anonymous
5/13/20, 10:26 PM
I quite understand the moral conflict boi is referring to. At this point, it could go either way. Someone discovering their gay or repressed side could be punishment enough if they feel remorse. I think you have a wonderful set up for a story of redemption, revenge, and even discovery. Well thought out. May I ask: are you English or is this part of your fantasy? Scottish here and I try to write as American as I can so I recognise some of the "Cut and Paste reality".
May 13, 2020
5/13/20, 10:12 PM
Minus the piss this story was extremely hot. Love the assplay.
5/13/20, 10:04 PM
Just follow the story. back and forth. opening up. Deeper and deeper, Razz... ;)
May 11, 2020
5/13/20, 9:22 PM
Love the cure for the virus coming from the semen of the mind-controlled victims. Looking forward to more more captures and more chapters.
5/13/20, 9:21 PM
You know, I've always have a fantasy involving a handsome motorcycle patrol officer with gloves, leather jacket, and tall shinny boots, all good looking and manly, but instead of his uniform pants, wearing a short fluffy tutu and pink frilly panties barely containing his big cock, and driving a girly motorcycle. I don't wanna interfere with what you're planning, but would be great if you include something similar, at one point. Punk boy could encourage them do some retooling to his patrol cars too, to fully debase the image of the police force.