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Ozark
5/12/20, 12:01 AM
please make sequel!
5/11/20, 11:49 PM
Such a good chapter. I just truly don't see Lane ending on top in the end. Maybe somehow his Dad and himself escape town and never vow to talk about what happened. Or somehow Lane and his Dad get put under Todd's control. I know Todd is going to win because of the epilogue of the first story, but I have a feeling something is going to happen that will change everything and it going to go down in the next chapter. Like you said why write a story if everything is going to be the same to start with. I look forward to reading the next chapters in two days. :)
5/11/20, 11:31 PM
Fuck!! That was hot!
Anonymous
5/11/20, 11:10 PM
Excellent
Anonymous
5/11/20, 11:04 PM
This was so hot! I have a total thing for guy's whose nips poke through their shirt, so I definitely enjoyed this :)
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/11/20, 10:33 PM
A 5 star rating on Tripadvisor for this place.
5/11/20, 10:25 PM
Interesting and promising. To me something is off in the flow of the first nine lines or so (the normal day and the meta bit about people involved in the story) but the rest of it is good. Combining a few paragraphs might have made sense, but, to me at least, the short paragraphs mostly give a nice flavor to the narrator's voice. A cynical narrator and a jock puppy werewolf in what seems to be a sweet tale is a very promising combination. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Anonymous
5/11/20, 10:11 PM
Love to see Baker transform his friend into another black knight!!
5/11/20, 8:51 PM
Genial ver qué está historia continua, me gusta esta nueva dirección que todo está tomando! Sigue con el buen trabajo
Stephen
5/11/20, 8:15 PM
Awesome beginning. Thanks for sharing this idea!