Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/7/20, 7:41 AM
I think the sad outweighed the horny for me :( Well written though.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 5:09 AM
Very hot! Looking forward to a part 2
Anonymous
5/7/20, 4:54 AM
It was very sweet :) Would love to read more, but understand if you feel it has reached its conclusion.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 4:32 AM
This series is the best I've seen on this site in a long time and this story is the best in the series so far, love love love how dumb and hung and horny and dumb he got! Love the kinda reality change aspect too. Keep up the good work, bro!
5/7/20, 4:16 AM
Good work! I agree with the pacing concerns - but the overall the writing is great. Feels like this story has a lot of neat places it could go - for me I'm Jon doesn't stay under for too long; I really want to see them as rivals. And costumes!
Elm
5/7/20, 3:43 AM
He is so cute! hopefully we see some Orcs in this world of yours :)
5/7/20, 3:28 AM
Bro, this shit fucking slaps, bro.
5/7/20, 3:13 AM
Bro, you writin' another bro story, bro?
Rick
5/7/20, 2:09 AM
Loved this story, very hot. The mental images are very attractive, and I hope you will write more!
5/7/20, 1:09 AM
Loved it! Can't wait to see what's next!