Recent Comments

Moby
5/6/20, 8:02 PM
Wait.... Damian and Jon.. Is that a reference to Superboy and Robin?
5/6/20, 7:25 PM
I just need more chapters. This is so incredibly well written. Looking forward to read more!
5/6/20, 6:18 PM
i rarely comment but these two chapters were amazing! Great job!
5/6/20, 5:52 PM
This is so good! πŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ
Anonymous
5/6/20, 4:59 PM
this is really interesting! I genuinely am not sure what theyre doing to the protagonist and cant wait to find out. loving this series
FoxPup
5/6/20, 4:58 PM
Such a hot story! What a shame if it were to go to waste :(
5/6/20, 4:14 PM
The Saga continues in the Sequel "The Follow up" at [ https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/1448787](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/1448787)
Anonymous
5/6/20, 3:58 PM
Please make more this is amazing
5/6/20, 3:37 PM
This is such a gratifying story. I loved the way the changes were done and we don't know more than that the mystery makes it so much more sexy.
5/6/20, 3:27 PM
I completely understand that concern, New Guy. I wanted to leave this part as more of an opening (a rather long one, haha). The next part will address some of the "incomplete" story elements here to make this story seem a bit more fleshed out. I agree that the pacing could have been slower, and will work on that for future installments. Thanks for the critiques!