Recent Comments

Martin
5/6/20, 8:44 AM
I loved that series' premise. It's a nice idea and close enough to many of my own fantasies, which usually would put myself into Curtis' shoes. However, I'd also have preferred a more happy ending. I understand why you wrote that last chapter and the twist you wanted to tell. But honestly, I think that could have been done it a better, more sexy and interesting way. It doesn't really give credit to your whole series. In general, it's aways better to give the reader a good feeling at the end. I don't want to have a bad feeling after reading these stories, especially when the characters are given a personality you can relate to (which you excelled with). There would have been SO many options to create a twist while STILL giving the reader the feeling that both Greg and Curtis enjoy they're life - no matter in what way - than just leaving them hanging there with a pretended relationship bound to break up. That's really the worst outcome for me.
Moby
5/6/20, 6:14 AM
Well well. Lane might be taking a road he might not like. Too early to say anything, but I'm liking were this is going
Omegajock
5/6/20, 6:10 AM
This is awesome, I'm sure many of us have fantasized about using/being used by the hot jock roommate or guy next door. Looking forward to your future stories and chapters!
5/6/20, 4:25 AM
What would really be interesting is if Lane take over the newspaper and escapes Todd's wrath. Lane could still have control over Dylan and there could be a spin off that way. Todd would still have Nathan doing his bidding. But Lane could be full on dictator mode at the Newspaper and fully take over. Haha now that would be real interesting. Seeing the innocent at first be corrupted to be like Todd but maybe a little better.
5/6/20, 4:22 AM
Bro, whatever wave you're riding right now, keep at it. Some of the hottest shit I've read in years, bro.
Anonymous
5/6/20, 4:08 AM
Hope to see more!
Anonymous
5/6/20, 3:24 AM
im intrigued of how Lane would improve the world if he was the one in charge i'd like to see it as a dream or as a mindscape (cause i really want that Todd wins)
KFr
5/6/20, 3:03 AM
Though 'head first' is preferable for victims, any additional CV story is welcomed, especially one with an original plot like this.
Swizzington
5/6/20, 2:52 AM
I haven't taught them, but I did just finish being one. None of my peers were like that :-)
Anonymous
5/6/20, 2:22 AM
great job swizz very creative keeping it interesting!