Recent Comments

5/4/20, 12:23 AM
Wow!!! And how is this chapter for all you who were complaining about the predictability???!!!! Forgot about the glasses and this is what happens; Swizzington comes through with a major swerve and changes things. Thank you, Swizzington for your work so far; I can appreciate the breaking a chapter because of length and I can sympathize with you with the criticism that can come with your work. I'm loving this leg of the story and will wholeheartedly encourage you to keep going. I'm looking forward to the next part!!! (Let your fans know how we can help you keep things going!!)
Swizzington
5/4/20, 12:21 AM
Glad you guys are enjoying it :-) Fair warning: As I will be writing half the next chapter from scratch, there may be a small delay. I'm aiming for Tuesday but I can't be sure. First I have to think of a 'mindscape' theme worth writing about (good ideas are hard to come up with!).
Anonymous
5/4/20, 12:12 AM
Looking forward to reading more! The updates have been so awesome!!
Anonymous
5/4/20, 12:05 AM
Ok here we go. This is what I was expecting from the series. Although I do suspect things will go wrong and Todd will end up back in control. At least we have some conflict/some resistance to it all.
Anonymous
5/3/20, 11:26 PM
would love to see more chapters. very well written
Anonymous
5/3/20, 11:04 PM
still loving this!! can't wait for more
EntrancedGay92
5/3/20, 10:34 PM
As soon as I read the description about this being a school dad attended, I got hard. I hope it's revealed how the father was still be subliminally controlled by the Academy all these years. Nice work.
Ozark
5/3/20, 10:10 PM
cant wait for for part 7
5/3/20, 9:05 PM
I love the lurid dramatic transformations