Recent Comments

8/10/25, 10:12 PM
I looove love it! This story went from a 10 to an 11 man. Infectious muscle growth is always so hot! 🤤 Can't wait to see Mike "grow" his company further. 😉

8/10/25, 11:02 PM
@[Aether](/user/show/1508576) Thanks, man! Yeah, I'm a sucker for infectious growth that corrupts minds, if that's not already obvious! Figured I could find some like-minded people here 😁

8/11/25, 9:53 AM
@[CritJock](/user/show/10004314) Well I can assure you I'm really into it. Eager to see more from you! 👍😄
8/11/25, 9:26 AM
I wish this story would continue. It's so hot 🥲. I'd love to have seen how Aiden turns and welcomes his new brother
8/11/25, 5:41 AM
I think it's time that we see Mike really embrace being a slut for other men. Send them to the local adult store or sauna and see some hot water sports and orgy action. Ending in Mike becoming so loose by the end of the second week that he becomes a power fisting cumdump bottom.
8/11/25, 4:02 AM
Is this how Janet felt waiting for dr frankfurter to finish that god damn syllable? Im DYING here lmao

8/11/25, 4:18 AM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) I'll take that as a compliment. :joy: Two more chapters left!
Anonymous
8/11/25, 1:55 AM
Thanks for the background. You definitely succeeded with the goals you were aiming for non-explicit mind control. The mind control part in the first half was definitely excellent - top notch for this site. I also take your point on them talking like heroes - you are telling a story of archetypes and the language is the language of the archetypes. I’ll definitely keep reading, but best you stick to your own vision rather than take advice from me because I don’t think any advice from me would be coherent with your vision.

8/11/25, 2:07 AM
@Anonymous HELLOOOOOOO! thank you absolutely for taking time to read this story. We only have 2 parts left, afterwards ill decide whether to bring out the spicier chapters if that's a thing that people would ask for, because when the time I wrote this, it's been a while since I wrote smut. But aside from that, I HOPE YOU ENJOY THE LAST 2 PARTS BY THE TIME THEY RELEASE. It was such a mind contorting activity to transform the plot into something more real while keeping the erotic undertones of the relationship with how our heroes discovered a new part of themselves they've come to accept. I hope you guys are enjoying two relationships unfolding too, as Sol and Valorion's journey now diverge while still being a same path. The main part of the next chapter is all about Lucien's past, obsession, how he got so powerful, etc which was always what people wondered about when they gave me feedback Once again, thank you for reading. And im excited to hear what you think about the next chapter as it will establish the finales plot.
GWR
8/11/25, 2:03 AM
Ugh - that was my anonymous post - I thought I was logged in. Then logged in and posted again and it still came through as anon 🤦‍♂️
Anonymous
8/11/25, 2:00 AM
Thanks for the background. You definitely succeeded with the goals you were aiming for non-explicit mind control. The mind control part in the first half was definitely excellent - top notch for this site. I also take your point on them talking like heroes - you are telling a story of archetypes and the language is the language of the archetypes. I just realized I haven’t finished everything on your watt pad so there’s still more for me to discover. I’ll definitely keep reading to see where this goes but I don’t think I have advice for anything that would be coherent with what you’ve already created.
Anonymous
8/11/25, 1:43 AM
This was insanely hot - thank you. Love the idea of caging Mike - but he doesn't really notice when he's his normal self. It just "feels normal." And please make him feel like he needs to bring other hot guys to join in on the sleep study 🥵
Skittles
8/11/25, 12:16 AM
Maybe his frat bros notice his slutty pink underwear in the gym?

8/11/25, 12:46 AM
Or maybe one of his frat bros wants to wear a slutty pink thong? @Skittles
8/11/25, 12:28 AM
FuckN Gr8 Mate, do fuckN More!