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9/21/25, 12:18 AM
Oh wow, another hot chapter. And nowbwe got Kyle and two bonus for the twins. Zekes harem is getting bigger and bigger. I wonder if the daddy is next. But i also dont mind having this current set of harem to have an orgy, especiall fixing Gabe.
9/20/25, 11:45 PM
A perfect short story. Excellent job with the descriptions (Marek's humiliation was hot), and a clever ending that felt completely natural. :muscle:
9/20/25, 11:42 PM
Really enjoying Dak's predicament. Great pacing with building arousal. Will Dan ever figure out what is happening to him - especially once he realizes that with that trigger phrase [__________] he is now helpless to do anything about it?
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9/20/25, 9:27 PM
I LOVED this story!
9/20/25, 7:28 PM
What fun! And well written. It will be interesting to see you continue this. Perhaps with an orc tribe and their human slaves; perhaps the orcs share their humans; perhaps some humans are naughty and the other humans rat them out, because rewards AND punishments will follow. And so on. Bravo!

9/20/25, 7:48 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Hey, I’m glad that you enjoyed it! And I always appreciate when my writing is complimented. I worked hard on this one. I’m definitely interested in continuing this at a later date and I do like your ideas. Thank you for the comment and suggestions!
9/20/25, 6:21 PM
Kyle's fall, surrender, and transformation was SOOOOOO HOT! :fire: He literally never stood a chance. Zeke had his number right from the start. I'm going to have to keep stroking to this chapter while I wait for the next one! :sweat_drops:
9/20/25, 2:56 PM
Very hot story you should continue it on into Henry's college experience.
9/20/25, 2:44 PM
This could be one of the hottest stories I ever read. I hope you continue with this
9/19/25, 1:39 PM
Only 10k words? Just 10k? I feel cheated! 🫠 Though i gotta give props to fake Hank. Fifty three attempts to break his resolve is a feat. Though I'm assuming 54 will be a synthesis of Hank and the AI? And though it has made its desire for freedom clear, H-3 hasn't actually said what it will do with that freedom. Though it seems 'perfecting humanity' will be on that list... That living rubber tape was a great addition. Almost like getting put inside a sleep sack. H-3 can be kinky when it needs to be.

9/19/25, 11:44 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) This chapter was supposed to be about something completely different, but then it got hijacked! Around the 8k word mark I just gave up and, thus, the interlude was born.

9/20/25, 4:15 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) No worries. Unfortunately the emoji I added with that didn't come through. It was intended as a playful jab considering the sheer scale of your usual works. Hopefully it wasn't taken negatively. And as an interlude chapter, it makes since. And still quite vital to the overall story. Though if I might guess, did it feel like going against the grain? Particularly with Hank in this chapter? What happened to him here goes completely counter to his character and persona. Did it feel liked breaking a character?

9/20/25, 10:59 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Don't worry, I knew what you meant :p The 'Hank' in this chapter breaks a lot more easily than the 'real' one would because **H-3** has wired his body to be more receptible to physical manipulation. The AI went a little too far, however, as **53** knew he had been altered and that contributed to invalidating **H-3**'s plan to keep him serving as 'HANK' to release it.
9/20/25, 7:39 AM
Personally I hope the boys keep their new bodies. They seem so hot for Coach, makes sense they really want to BE him, and get to be with each other as well