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4/6/20, 7:02 AM
i want to see a chapter with the Nike 270s in pink.
4/6/20, 6:14 AM
*lol* By the time I'd read this comment, I'd been considering another rewrite. I've always had a bit of a problem with 'Show don't Tell' but I'm working on it. It's going to be a total rewrite, so it's going to be a while before I can start the re-edits. Thank you for the feedback, you actually pin pointed my disastifaction, I appreciate it. :)
4/6/20, 3:04 AM
my dick started pre-leaking as soon as i got to the leather heavily pierced piss stinking punk - fuck your stories are hot
Anonymous
4/6/20, 2:54 AM
stupid good txtx
Anonymous
4/6/20, 12:59 AM
This was amazing! I always love when cockshrink is combined with ass growth. I would love to see more of this pair
4/5/20, 11:13 PM
I would love to see more of this story. Awesome! Thanks for writing.
4/5/20, 10:16 PM
MORE, PLEASE! please please please
4/5/20, 10:01 PM
I really love the voyeurism and the complete control -- super-sexy.
4/5/20, 9:58 PM
Since I commented about something I liked about this in another part, I feel like I can make a slightly more negative comment here on the worldbuilding and not be a complete asshole: Wouldn't a fraternity in a majority gay world be having sex together a lot? And wouldn't that expose Jimmy's heterosexuality much earlier? Like other people said earlier, this future world doesn't seem to make a lot of sense. But that said, line by line and scene by scene this was very hot - the background just needed a little more thought to make it work.
Anonymous
4/5/20, 9:49 PM
Fuck that was hot. I've read it twice, and came both times. Excellent, excellent work.