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Drepanididae
4/5/20, 2:34 AM
Ohhh, this has great promise, is mental hijacking intentional, or an accident. i hope we learn more.
Anonymous
4/5/20, 2:34 AM
Ohhh, this has great promise, is mental hijacking intentional, or an accident. i hope we learn more.
ghostly
4/5/20, 2:07 AM
such a clever idea omg, and really hot too!
4/5/20, 1:46 AM
I second out ahead. interesting then things stall. see at And then truncate. stuff stuffs making sense. It's got promise but when able take time to revise. let us enjoy the imagery, characterization, tension, and conflict of interaction
Anonymous
4/5/20, 1:00 AM
Fucking great, mate!
Jimmy M
4/5/20, 12:41 AM
I have always loved your writing, no matter where I find it. Keep it up Nicky. I'd love to see this continue!
Anonymous
4/5/20, 12:34 AM
Can't wait to see more, this is really promising!
Anonymous
4/5/20, 12:32 AM
the top quality here is that it's very cute
4/5/20, 12:16 AM
Wow. Simple, effective. The repetition of the text almost becomes entrancing to the reader. I love the oddness of this. It's really set some ideas in motion in my head.
Anonymous
4/5/20, 12:06 AM
I love this series. I love the innocence and the almost Steinbeckian rawness of the characters. Lovely and wonderful!