Recent Comments

4/4/20, 6:55 PM
You might have to copy it from Word and then make adjustments; that's how I upload my stories. I generally love where the story is going, but I have to say that this leg felt a bit rushed in pacing. The fast pace definitely worked with the action of Ben breaking into Nick's apartment and grabbing Nick, but the back half definitely felt it could've been a bit slower and had Nick fighting a bit more. But aside from that good story and keep putting the chapters out.
4/4/20, 3:43 PM
Hey guys, please come back! I can't wait to read more! I love this story so much!
Anonymous
4/4/20, 3:13 PM
Great story
4/4/20, 2:52 PM
If anyone can tell me how to format it on here properly, that would be great.
4/4/20, 2:46 PM
That's actually how I had it formatted when I wrote it, but this site won't recognize that formatting for some reason.
4/4/20, 2:27 PM
super hot story! keep writing pleasw
Anonymous
4/4/20, 2:05 PM
It's a good story but the formatting is bad. You need a break between speakers. It's like one long run on sentence. It takes away from what would otherwise be a very good story. Try a new line for each speaker or clarifying who is saying what with their names
Anonymous
4/4/20, 1:10 PM
such a hot story and transformation!!!
Anonymous
4/4/20, 1:06 PM
More mascot plssssssss!!!