Recent Comments

4/5/20, 12:16 AM
Wow. Simple, effective. The repetition of the text almost becomes entrancing to the reader. I love the oddness of this. It's really set some ideas in motion in my head.
Anonymous
4/5/20, 12:06 AM
I love this series. I love the innocence and the almost Steinbeckian rawness of the characters. Lovely and wonderful!
4/4/20, 11:46 PM
super hot! thanks
Anonymous
4/4/20, 11:26 PM
HAhahahaha.. Bloody loved it...especially the Tiger King comment!! Well played, Sir!
Kovu
4/4/20, 10:42 PM
please continue or write more stories!!
jockboy111
4/4/20, 9:48 PM
So fucking hot!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, maybe the pills leave him in a stupor of some kind where hes half awake half asleep and MC walks in and Daniel thinks its all a dream as he rails his roomate, leaving him questioning how it feel irl
Apr 2, 2020
4/4/20, 9:47 PM
This is an amazing story and I'm flattered and honored to have inspired it. I hope to see more from you.
Jack
4/4/20, 9:43 PM
love it!
Anonymous
4/4/20, 9:33 PM
Damn, that's good. At first I hoped that the product you were offering for sale was a trip to Kingsbury....But more stories are always a good option! :)
Hypnominion
4/4/20, 8:20 PM
I agree about the back half; a more in-depth transition ...even though you had clearly intended for it to go smoother because of the prior exposure was called for...would've made the section of narrative more engaging. Think of it like an action film: each battle becomes more dramatic than the last. This aside, well done.