Recent Comments

3/29/20, 1:13 PM
I liked the ending. Good stuff.
3/29/20, 12:57 PM
I'm loving this story. Even the opening scene with the tranced realtor is so hot!
3/29/20, 12:25 PM
finally a haircut/fetish story...i thought i was the only one that liked those kind of stories!
Anonymous
3/29/20, 11:52 AM
great story hope you continue this , see a few of brads friends in , plus will larkin release him after 2 weeks
Anonymous
3/29/20, 11:50 AM
One of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Keep it up, it's so hot.
LongtimeFan
3/29/20, 11:25 AM
Amazing stuff! Your writing is still impeccable ("Bette Davis playing tag," what a line). And I love how you present the dangers of consumption/consumerism/monopolies in a way that almost makes the reader forget. We want to cheer for Jamie's transformation--but with every new Reflex product and market, he's spending more money, and they're taking over more and more. Pleasure is a lot harder to resist than pain...well done! And thank you for the distancing reminder, too. Please be safe, everyone!
Anonymous
3/29/20, 10:50 AM
spectacular
3/29/20, 10:19 AM
love this man! keep it up :)
Anonymous
3/29/20, 8:56 AM
what about the dad do you want JoSmith to do? i think the story between them both is still developing and maybe in the future, there may be something happening since we still dont know a lot of the chip. idk, just theorizing
Mar 28, 2020
CopsRhot
3/29/20, 7:35 AM
Love cops that end up getting corrupted. I especially like stories where the cop's morals get compromised. I agree with Pupscout's comment. The mind control feels too easy and abrupt. I also think that there should be more challenge in taking down the cops. Overall though, you are doing a good job!