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3/20/20, 10:28 PM
Ok, one hand, its a shame that the mind control parts are less and less, but on the other one, I love the chemistry between them and their relationship getting stronger and challenged <3
3/20/20, 9:30 PM
Did you move these to a new site?
3/20/20, 9:28 PM
@New Guy In Town Hey whats the order of and stories I can read this in to get a feel for things. I suspect not exact continuity but evolving of concept and understanding how develop and what to expect is needed? Links please?
Mar
3/20/20, 8:42 PM
I loved how he pleaded not to be seduced. Then final capitulation. I love it when they beg. So were both flatmates straight? Need more stories.
3/20/20, 7:16 PM
I didn't expect part 2 so soon after part 1 and it doesn't disappoint. It's even better than part 1. The brevity of paragraphs creates a flow and yet in each small paragraph you're able to paint such amazing images and convey so much. It is amazing (and I'm truly jealous of) how you're able to do so much with so few words. In reading it, I really would like to meet this Meister as I would be one of those who be willing to go under his control and who wouldn't want to leave him. You made part 1 an amazingly enticing appetizer to feed me this first course and I don't want things to end. If you can go with this, please continue. I want more of the Meister and the people who are his subjects.
Drake Nightstrom
3/20/20, 6:23 PM
Darkblade2814 - Yep! That's part of the changes, that they don't realize there are any changes, not really.
3/20/20, 3:33 PM
there will indeed, ive been working on part two today! beyond that i cant say for sure how long it will go on but i am glad you're enjoying it.
Anonymous
3/20/20, 3:11 PM
I **LOVED** this outstanding story. Will there be part two?
3/20/20, 1:49 PM
wonderful story enjoyed every word of it.
3/20/20, 12:08 PM
Very interesting piece. There's a poetic quality to the flow while capturing the control of the narrator. Really has a different style than anything on this site. Please continue with this narrative.