Recent Comments

9/22/25, 10:11 PM
Awesome story! I love the great amount of detail you put into your work. Good to see Elliot and Parker get together. ❤️

9/22/25, 10:58 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Really glad you liked it. I started working on it about a month ago to give it more time and attention.
9/22/25, 10:46 PM
This has to be one of my favorite stories on this site. I'm always a fan of sons topping their fathers, and this was done so good. The writing was exceptional, the scenes had a good pacing and the main characters really have a distinct personality. My favorite part still has to be what you did with Teddy - having a subby POV at first was a refreshing POV on a genre (sons doming dads) that couldn't really have that otherwise, with the added brotherly dynamic, that wasn't about manipulating and taking control of the brother but rather making his wishes come true - this made this chapter's snippets in Teddy's life a real treat. Nicky being a menace, even from afar - beautiful. Keep up the good work, slowly getting through your works.
Tanner
9/22/25, 8:35 PM
Really loving this story. Hope you keep it going. It’s particularly great how he has been transformed into this devoted and obedient toy.
Monty
9/22/25, 5:48 PM
This is by far the best ABDL story that I’ve ever read. I was so engrossed in this story that I couldn’t put my phone down. I started reading it last night and I’ve barely gotten anything done since then because I couldn’t stop reading this story. Oh, I wish that it could go on.
9/22/25, 4:02 PM
I quite enjoyed this. It hit the muscle growth and the jockifying itch I like to have scratched when I read a hot story. I loved how Elliot was unaware of both his changes to himself (which were described very well and in the perfect amount of hot detail) and his changes to everyone around him. He even affected the girls at the school, making them think the guys being gay was normal. And the teachers, for extra hotness. And to top that all off, the sex with Evan was very hot, and it had a nice romantic ending. Very nicely done.

9/22/25, 4:11 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thank you so much!
9/22/25, 5:22 AM
Love the description of the transformation and the thinking of the gushers. Will there be other types of zombies?

9/22/25, 3:53 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) I don't have any plans to introduce new zombies, but that doesn't necessarily mean I won't in the future. I really wanted to focus on the dumbing down of the characters and the transformation into a muscular gusher. Thank you for the positive feedback.
9/21/25, 3:53 AM
Good story. Wish the transformation was a bit more drawn out and talked about how it happened as well as more resistance to the change. Also, love a bottom cuck story.. don't see those often.

9/22/25, 3:06 PM
@[Eventide](/user/show/959142) I love a bottom cuck story too! Thanks for reading. Ya this was a quick idea that popped into mind that I wanted to get out.
9/20/25, 9:21 PM
Terrific story -- great premise. I wish you'd allowed that scene at the end to play a bit longer, while the boys are fucking themselves in time on identical Coach cocks.

9/22/25, 3:05 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Hey thanks! I’m wondering if I should go back and revisit that section!
9/22/25, 9:35 AM
Is it expected to go on Kindle unlimited any time soon?

9/22/25, 10:40 AM
@[SmokingVampire](/user/show/10001507) It’s on Kindle Unlimited even now!

9/22/25, 2:32 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) It doesn't look available in Spain's Kindle Unlimited, probably a matter of time then. Thanks! and keep writing please :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
9/22/25, 1:30 PM
Aww, it's good to be back, hopefully I'll get back to writing something, am in the early stages of a nice little halloween entry featuring my old southern belle Miss Darcy. and thanks for the mention, it's nice to be mentioned and seen. Love your stuff, you are a real inspiration.