Recent Comments

Geoff M
2/14/20, 3:37 PM
Loved this story! It would be great to see the ramifications of dad dealing with the client and how he handled it. Well done! Dealing with the house rules outside of the house offers a lot of opportunity!
Anonymous
2/14/20, 3:06 PM
each and every detail amazed me by revealing new information, giving me some surprises or insights. Brilliant!!
Anonymous
2/14/20, 10:13 AM
Excellent
LongtimeFan
2/14/20, 10:08 AM
Hot stuff! Loving the story, the worldbuilding, and especially the descriptions of VIC (I like asses, what can I say?). :p Plus the hypnosis makes as much sense as to be expected in these tales--free stuff and "trial periods" are already tempting without subliminals. Fantastic!
MakeMeAPigToo
2/14/20, 9:47 AM
Still my favorite for a good time!
Rodready
2/14/20, 9:37 AM
This is really good and the sly humor in just the right amount is a bonus.
2/14/20, 8:26 AM
Just amazing. I'm really digging the physical-change-through-subliminal-control thing, and the plot is moving along at a seductive pace. Keep it going dude!
Anonymous
2/14/20, 7:37 AM
Looking forward to meeting James 2.0 and his personality transformation!!
Anonymous
2/14/20, 6:49 AM
I did not expect Part 2 came so fast!! Thank you so much!! I really enjoyed the exchanges that James had with Carson and VIC. Nicely paced with lots of details.
Anonymous
2/14/20, 5:26 AM
Me, too. I'm getting a kick of the different story lines.