Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/10/20, 7:24 AM
Would love to see more
NZCUB
2/10/20, 5:43 AM
You have a amazing way of narrating & presenting stories, I have read and re read your stories many times and loved them all, please keep up the great work.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:39 AM
You going to continue writing more :)?
Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:15 AM
wow...i wonder what will happen once you bring out the pimp....that will be so hot!!!!!!
2/10/20, 5:05 AM
Hope Ivan isn't brain damaged and there are no lasting effects.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:02 AM
The writing was too rushed and doesn't make sense. Go a little slower and think about what you're writing and how it sounds when you speak it out loud.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 4:08 AM
Well, first, let's start with the writing. It sucked. It was written and never edited. Second, the story -- holy shit! I think that's all I can handle.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 4:02 AM
Hot and funny, especially at the end!!!
Anonymous
2/10/20, 3:45 AM
strongly reminds me of an animated clip I've seen on a couple sites. may want to change a few things, for copyright safety
2/10/20, 1:55 AM
I get how it could have been it's own story. It's linked to the others because of the ring aspect. I do plan to write other stories that are not ring related.